“It’s that feeling you have when you want to control time itself.”
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“If only I could make time go back …”
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bottom panel, how is his mouth open if his lips are closed?
also i just don’t understand who’s talking anymore or what’s happening, been very confused for the last couple pages. wondering if that’s intentional?
aaaaaaaaaw shit.
I fixed the mouth.
Regarding conversations, I can understand why it’d seem confusing, I’ll talk to a few friends for a second opinion, because it’s an issue I’m not quite sure how to fix at the moment.
that looks better!
idk if a stranger’s input would help, but my problem has mostly been, ever since these people here became the focus, and especially on this page in the first panel, i can’t tell who’s talking. and like, i THINK the “when will it end” line is Green Hat having a thought before the audible sigh but it could also have been someone off-panel talking and him sighing at them in response.
storywise, and this is what’s probably intentional (i have no idea as i am not you) there’s also the whole thing where they’re apparently confused about the fur/apparently only just now realizing that fur is coming from foxes or something like that? i could just be missing something because, like i said, i’m having a lot of trouble understanding who’s saying what/telling the difference between what’s actually dialogue and what’s internal thought a character is having, but this is throwing me off pretty bad.
i also figured emmy’s mom died a while ago (like a month or so at least) so i don’t quite understand why Green Hat still has her pelt on him, especially since it seems he’s anti-fox hunting even though he’s still hunting for sport? i think?
i dunno. i’m sure it’ll get cleared up but i figure i should explain why i’m confused instead of just rudely stating confusion and not elaborating further. sorry this got long.
Let’s hope the GOLDEN fur is a plot point.
Its Ezmeralda’s mom’s fur…
That’s what I was betting on
But then again it sounds like there’s multiple pelts involved here, sooo idk