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I wish……. oh wait, I did not back this comic.
Darn…
I think Azure meant to say “wanderin” not “wonderin” in the last panel. Also “outta” is short for “out of”. I think you mean to put “oughta” which would mean “ought to”
Also, final nitpick; you could probably drop that second “here” in the dialogue in the final panel, it’s really redundant. “I’ll be wanderin’ over here, past these gates!” sounds more like something a person would say.
Sorry for the criticism.
Don’t apologize for free help, that’s stupid.
You’d be surprised how many times I’ve had artists get legitimately angry at me for pointing out errors. I feel like apologizing helps indicate that I’m not trolling and actually am trying to give constructive feedback.
Scott is not one of those overly sensitive types, and can admit tiny faults in his work.
As a general advice to artists, I never recommend them getting angry at the viewer for pointing something out, even if they are wrong.
I don’t usually understand why artists get mad at criticism, it’s one of the biggest aids we can get. Especially with stuff like grammar.
I was always taught that if should get angry at anyone regarding my art, it should be only at myself so that I can get better. Also because I know myself better than anyone and I know when I should get mad at myself when I am not working to standards.
There is no need to apologize to me for having a good intent on helping me out, thanks for being so respectful too.
If that’s the case, am I allowed to tell you that you’re not so great at drawing hands?
It wasn’t that noticeable until pages 41 and 42 (especially 42, because of the closeups) and I wanted to say something on those last two pages, but there’s no way for me to actually help you with those because I do not draw, and artists seem to get especially angry when you point something out, but can’t do it yourself.
If you agree with what I said about the hands, maybe find an artist friend willing to help? Because I can’t, I can only say it looks wrong.
I am not the best at drawing hands in any regard. I’m still trying my best though.
You actually noticed a dialogue error on the last panel.
And yeah, thanks for the help… sometimes grammar errors get past me very easily.
You’re welcome.
i keem re readed that now you gonna listen to me ezzy as [ now you gon listen to me missy] XD